Fictional fumblings

Posted by Paul Raven @ 23-01-2007 in Science Fiction • Writing

For those who were wondering, I am still working on this month’s story, despite the fact that I’ll need to invent a time machine to fit in all the other stuff I need to do before the end of the month besides finishing it.

This tale got seriously derailed over the weekend, when I realised one of the central ideas wasn’t going to work. However, a solution presented itself at work today and I’ve managed to hack about what I had done already and add some more to it. I’m now fairly confident I can get a working story completed with the framework I’ve got, but it’s definitely not going to be pretty. Still, first drafts and all that, ‘finish what you start’ and so on. There’s a line from where I am now to the ending I had in mind, which is a good thing. Walking that line with words over the next eight days is going to be a challenge, though!

Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
2,103 / 7,500
(28.0%)

Oh, and in reply to Sterling’s comment on the last progress report - I have no idea what I’ll do with it once it’s done. It’d be nice to think I’ll be confident enough in it to try sending it out for publication, but I think it’ll want a fair bit of polish before I’m willing to consider that. Maybe I’ll try one of those online story workshops to get some critique - if anyone reading can recommend one, I’d be very grateful.

In the meantime, all focus is on getting the bugger finished to deadline. That is my spur here - I’ve never missed a deadline for anything I’ve had published, as far as essays and reviews go, and so I’m damned if I’ll ruin my record and let myself break a deadline I’ve set for myself … [clenches fist determinedly]

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6 Responses to “Fictional fumblings”

  1. James says:

    If you’re a BSFA member, I’ve found the email Orbiter critique groups very useful.

  2. Paul Raven says:

    Thanks for the tip, James. I knew they existed, but assumed they’d be aimed at the more advanced writer - which I am most definitely not! If you reckon they’d be worth a go for a total n00b, I may well give them a look.

  3. Michael says:

    I’m making mine publicly available on Google Docs (which I’m using to write it) for anyone who wants to see it in progress. When finished, it will be released under a CC license and available free online.

  4. Paul Raven says:

    Wow - that’s pretty brave of you, Martin. Have you done much writing before, or are you a newcomer also?

  5. Michael says:

    I’ve written on and off for years, but have recently dedicated myself to really getting it out there and working on sf and fantasy writing and illustration.

  6. James says:

    The BSFA orbiters are very friendly. Groups of 4 or 5, so you get to know your orbiter. I like getting the feedback, even if people don’t like the stories (everyone is usually very constructive). It feels a bit weird making comments about other peoples writing to start with, but the process really helped my own writing.

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