Comments on: Friday Flash: Gabriel and Jezebel http://www.velcro-city.co.uk/friday-flash-gabriel-and-jezebel/ Science fiction, science fact, and all that's in between ... Tue, 02 Mar 2010 08:23:50 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: Neil http://www.velcro-city.co.uk/friday-flash-gabriel-and-jezebel/comment-page-1/#comment-142744 Neil Fri, 15 Feb 2008 20:22:54 +0000 http://www.velcro-city.co.uk/friday-flash-gabriel-and-jezebel/#comment-142744 As the others say there's something here, would be cool to see it fleshed out to something longer. As the others say there’s something here, would be cool to see it fleshed out to something longer.

]]> By: Greg O'Byrne http://www.velcro-city.co.uk/friday-flash-gabriel-and-jezebel/comment-page-1/#comment-142737 Greg O'Byrne Fri, 15 Feb 2008 18:51:31 +0000 http://www.velcro-city.co.uk/friday-flash-gabriel-and-jezebel/#comment-142737 I expect that Gabe will have trouble attending to his duties as he obsesses about the girl and life outside the "monastary". Calls for an adventure, a fall from grace, a redemption, a rejection...there's a lot there. I expect that Gabe will have trouble attending to his duties as he obsesses about the girl and life outside the “monastary”.

Calls for an adventure, a fall from grace, a redemption, a rejection…there’s a lot there.

]]> By: ShaunCG http://www.velcro-city.co.uk/friday-flash-gabriel-and-jezebel/comment-page-1/#comment-142728 ShaunCG Fri, 15 Feb 2008 14:30:39 +0000 http://www.velcro-city.co.uk/friday-flash-gabriel-and-jezebel/#comment-142728 Nice piece - though one part of me wonders where this isolated cult at the top of a huge tower gets their water from. Unless it rains a lot, though for some reason I imagined the world of New Southsea as being somewhat dry. Nice piece – though one part of me wonders where this isolated cult at the top of a huge tower gets their water from. Unless it rains a lot, though for some reason I imagined the world of New Southsea as being somewhat dry.

]]> By: GLP http://www.velcro-city.co.uk/friday-flash-gabriel-and-jezebel/comment-page-1/#comment-142723 GLP Fri, 15 Feb 2008 13:13:03 +0000 http://www.velcro-city.co.uk/friday-flash-gabriel-and-jezebel/#comment-142723 You are right, this does feel like the opening of something longer - it is intriguing and I would like to see Gabriel take Jez up on her offer of lunch - an innocent abroad in New Southsea. You are right, this does feel like the opening of something longer – it is intriguing and I would like to see Gabriel take Jez up on her offer of lunch – an innocent abroad in New Southsea.

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