Comments on: Friday Flash: New kid blues

By: Dan

Dan — Fri, 23 Nov 2007 23:01:06 +0000

Alan Moore did a good six worder:

“machine. Unexpectedly I’d invented a time”

By: GLP

GLP — Fri, 23 Nov 2007 21:15:44 +0000

Six word story, eh? How about:

“Old Hank’s mule shuffles home, riderless.”

By: GLP

GLP — Fri, 23 Nov 2007 21:05:56 +0000

I thought exactly the same as GDJ, and I liked the reversal at the end.

By: Paul Raven

Paul Raven — Fri, 23 Nov 2007 17:41:13 +0000

Cheers, Gareth! And Stargeezer – nothing Hemingway ever did is easy to replicate! He has that reputation for a reason … I should really read some of his work.

By: Stargeezer

Stargeezer — Fri, 23 Nov 2007 17:06:03 +0000

One paragraph should be easy. Hemmingway once wrote a six word story:
“For sale, baby shoes, never worn.” (from memory.)
and challenged others to try it.
Cheers,
Stargeezer