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	<title>Comments on: Friday Flash: Revelation</title>
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	<description>Science fiction, science fact, and all that's in between ...</description>
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		<title>By: Shaun CG</title>
		<link>http://www.velcro-city.co.uk/friday-flash-revelation/comment-page-1/#comment-109195</link>
		<dc:creator>Shaun CG</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 13 Aug 2007 19:31:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>(Reposting as a character was misinterpreted as an HTML tag...)

This is a nice piece of flash (I count flash anything less than 1000 words, though definitions do seem to vary wildly). 

I agree with Jetse&#039;s quibbles with the underpinning logic. I also struggle with the idea that religious belief would experience a large-scale die-off to the extent described in just a century, but it&#039;s a long enough period of time that I can suspend my disbelief! 

But, more importantly in my opinion, the character is well-drawn and quickly established, and the idea of a very lonely, withdrawn man being pushed over the edge is perfect for the setting and concept.</description>
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<p>This is a nice piece of flash (I count flash anything less than 1000 words, though definitions do seem to vary wildly). </p>
<p>I agree with Jetse&#8217;s quibbles with the underpinning logic. I also struggle with the idea that religious belief would experience a large-scale die-off to the extent described in just a century, but it&#8217;s a long enough period of time that I can suspend my disbelief! </p>
<p>But, more importantly in my opinion, the character is well-drawn and quickly established, and the idea of a very lonely, withdrawn man being pushed over the edge is perfect for the setting and concept.</p>
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		<title>By: Jetse</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jetse</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 11 Aug 2007 21:26:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice one, but...

I strongly suspect that a civilisation that has enough space faring capability to *commercially* mine the asteroid belt, will be more than capable to intercept or push an Earth-impacting object off course.

(Actually, I very strongly suspect that *if* mining the asteroid belt is economically feasible, it will happen by robots or Van Neumann Machines, or something that&#039;s both. But I won&#039;t get mundane on your ass...;-)

It also begs the question why God would need to start again: if there are people mining the asteroid belt, I&#039;d expect them on the Moon and Mars (at least), as well.

Apart from my non-suspension of disbelief, a well set-up story, with good foreshadowing and character building.

And a final nitpick: I thought flash fiction was less than 500 words, and short-short between 500 and 1000 words? This one is -- I estimate -- more than 500 words.

Anyway: keep at it. You&#039;re definitely improving.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice one, but&#8230;</p>
<p>I strongly suspect that a civilisation that has enough space faring capability to *commercially* mine the asteroid belt, will be more than capable to intercept or push an Earth-impacting object off course.</p>
<p>(Actually, I very strongly suspect that *if* mining the asteroid belt is economically feasible, it will happen by robots or Van Neumann Machines, or something that&#8217;s both. But I won&#8217;t get mundane on your ass&#8230;;-)</p>
<p>It also begs the question why God would need to start again: if there are people mining the asteroid belt, I&#8217;d expect them on the Moon and Mars (at least), as well.</p>
<p>Apart from my non-suspension of disbelief, a well set-up story, with good foreshadowing and character building.</p>
<p>And a final nitpick: I thought flash fiction was less than 500 words, and short-short between 500 and 1000 words? This one is &#8212; I estimate &#8212; more than 500 words.</p>
<p>Anyway: keep at it. You&#8217;re definitely improving.</p>
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		<title>By: Neil</title>
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		<dc:creator>Neil</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 10 Aug 2007 22:54:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Paul - this is really good. Nice to have you back.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Paul &#8211; this is really good. Nice to have you back.</p>
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		<title>By: Paul Raven</title>
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		<dc:creator>Paul Raven</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 10 Aug 2007 17:36:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>LOL - cheers, Jeremy. I didn&#039;t write it as a dig at religion &lt;i&gt;per se&lt;/i&gt;, I just started thinking about what sort of person would take a job that isolated from society, and *ping*, instant character.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>LOL &#8211; cheers, Jeremy. I didn&#8217;t write it as a dig at religion <i>per se</i>, I just started thinking about what sort of person would take a job that isolated from society, and *ping*, instant character.</p>
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		<title>By: Jeremy Tolbert</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jeremy Tolbert</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 10 Aug 2007 17:11:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good stuff, Paul.  I can&#039;t help but hear a Henson puppeteer&#039;s voice in my head, saying &quot;Fundamentalists. In. Spppacccce!&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good stuff, Paul.  I can&#8217;t help but hear a Henson puppeteer&#8217;s voice in my head, saying &#8220;Fundamentalists. In. Spppacccce!&#8221;</p>
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