Comments on: Friday Flash: The New Arrival

By: Shaun CG

Shaun CG — Sat, 01 Dec 2007 13:33:42 +0000

Cute, well-written piece – nice characterisation. The idea of my household utilities chattering away over wireless really does appeal, too!

By: Dan

Dan — Sat, 01 Dec 2007 10:15:49 +0000

yep, really good. For some reason, it puts me in mind of Sam Slade – Robo Hunter from 2000AD ( a good thing)

By: Neil

Neil — Fri, 30 Nov 2007 16:52:44 +0000

Really Good. Really.

By: GLP

GLP — Fri, 30 Nov 2007 13:24:18 +0000

This is my favourite of your pieces so far. The dialogue is convincing and well-written, giving life to the inanimate characters. The length and pacing are spot on, and there’s a nice pay-off. Bravo.

By: dakegra

dakegra — Fri, 30 Nov 2007 12:42:50 +0000

ha! love it. Reminds me of Michael Marshall Smith’s talking appliances…